Wednesday, August 5, 2009

Assignment Nine Con't

I forgot to add the poem that I decided to freestyle which nearly killed me. I wrote it quickly and I haven't made any changes to it yet. Let me know what you think.

Green, Spring, jump up and down
Dogs running all around
Relaxing, Quiet, T.V. on mute
Children sleeping, it's nap time now

The sun is setting
Dinner has not been cooked
Soon mom and dad will be home
The work day done for now

The sun is gone, the moon is here
The stars are hidden by clouds
Rain starts to pour, lightning strikes, thunder booms
Children awaken and run to mom's room now

Mother comforts, father sleeps on
Another clash of thunder
Tears in children's eyes
Storm stops, everything quiet now

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